Akatsuki took me in:
Chapter 30: Checking you out.
*Reality*
Hidan: Oi! Shiyu wake up!
Shimu: Huh… What happened? *Sigh* I got in trouble again,
didn’t I?
Tobi: Haha! You’re not in trouble. Pein-sama just hit you by
mistake cause he was going to hit Hidan-sama and you got in the middle to
protect him and now you’re here! Pein-sama heal you, same with me and Kakuzu-sama
and I don’t remember who else… Konan…
Hidan: Shut Up! Are you al-
Itachi: Are you alright?
Hidan looked at him angry.
Itachi: What?
Shimu: I’m fine… Wait Pein-sama heal me?
Hidan: Yes. He was lucky I didn’t kill him right there.
Shimu: And Kakuzu?!
Hidan:… I have to pay him.
Shimu: I see…
There was an awkward silence, this made Itachi and Tobi
leave, leaving Hidan and Shimu alone. Shimu slowly grabbed Hidan’s hand, Hidan
looked at her to see that she was looking down.
Shimu: I had a bad dream… with everyone from the hide out… I
was like a demon I don’t know. And Hayato was there and told me that the time
is near…
Hidan: I had a bad dream with you also, and yeah same with
the demon.
Shimu: What can that mean?
Hidan: Nothing, its just a dream. Are you hungry? I’ll tell
Tobi to make you something to eat okay.
Shimu then was left alone in the cold room, she then put the
blankets over her and turned around facing the balcony, it was dark outside, no
wind. Why would Pein-sama heal me?... Shimu
thought, she then sigh and closed her eyes. To this moment Shimu for some
reason felt lonely, she felt cold, a tear slowly fell down her eye sliding it
self slowly on her cheek and falling to the pillow, I am so scared of that dream… What can this mean… That everyone is
going to turn their back on me even Hidan-sama?... Shimu thought.
Hidan: Oi…
Shimu opened her eyes and turned around to look at Hidan.
The coldness and loneliness feeling was gone when she saw that silver hair,
those pink-red-purple eyes, how tall he was and how strong he was, she slowly
gave him a smile. Hidan was standing there with a hot bowl of ramen, he then
notice she was crying, he sat the bowl down and walked close so her, he got on
his knees beside the bed facing her.
Hidan: Why are you crying? Did someone did something to you
just now?! I swear I will kill them! I am getting tired of these motherfuckers!
Shimu: *giggles* I’m fine Hidan-sama… *Rubs Hidan’s cheek*
I’m better now that you’re here.
Shimu looked at him straight in the eyes and so did Hidan. Am I falling for this killer? Shimu
thought. Why can’t I just ignore these
eyes? Hidan thought. Shimu began to get close to Hidan, she just wanted to
feel his lips against her. She then began to close her eyes slowly, Hidan
notice what she was about to do, then Shimu hit her lips on something warm… But
then it got hotter she then backed off to see the bowl on ramen right in front
of her face.
Hidan: Eat…
Hidan got up and helped her sit down.
Shimu: Arigato.
Hidan: I got you this…
Hidan then grabbed something under Shimu’s bed to see that
it was a rose. Shimu’s eyes widen open and blushed, she stopped eating and
looked at Hidan, Hidan was looking away with his hand giving her the rose.
Hidan: Tobi told me you would of like so… Here it is. It
wasn’t my idea! It was Tobi’s! So… take it.
Shimu took the rose and smelled it. She was blushing and had
a smile so big. Shimu with her finger told Hidan to get close to her, like if
she was going to tell him a secret, he rolled his eyes but got close to her,
when he was finally there Shimu slowly kissed his cheek, Hidan opened his eyes
wide and big at the feeling of her lips that even if the room was cold her lips
were still warm and soft. Hidan backed off slowly, he looked at her for a while
and then sat down on a chair.
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3 weeks went by Shimu could already move and walk around by
herself, with the help of Hidan, he didn’t let even Tobi get close to her. One
day Shimu was in her room and she was going to take a shower she then took her
stuff and walked to her bathroom. At the end of her bathroom door there are
some small windows facing down that the light come’s out from there, there is
no way someone could see inside the bathroom unless someone got down and looked
up the windows.
Hidan walked in Shimu’s room looking for her, when he got
there he didn’t find her, but he heard a door lock, it was her bathroom door,
he walked over to knocked on the her door but before he did he remember the
night he saw her on her night shirt, and the night of Tobi’s birthday. He then
decided to look up the windows of Shimu’s bathroom door, to see her untying her
pony tail and letting her long black hair fall to her shoulders and back, she
was with her bra on and hot pants, she turned around looking self at the mirror
to look at the whip bruises she had on her back, a few of them were gone but no
completely and by the looks of it they weren’t going any where, Shimu looked
down. Hidan notice she was upset but he didn’t care he was too busy checking
her out, Shimu then looked down to the windows of her door and saw someone she
gasp and opened the door fast, when she did no one was there. I must be seen things. Shimu thought. She
then walked back inside, closed the door and locked it. Hidan was on the roof
of her room. That was close… Hidan
thought. He then left thinking about her.
That same day Shimu went outside the hideout with Tobi, they
were by the river with their feet’s in the water.
Shimu: Tobi-kun…
Tobi: Yes?
Shimu: Thanks for the rose you told Hidan to give me when I
was hurt.
Tobi: Huh?
Shimu: All though Hidan gave it to me it was your idea
anyways.
Tobi: What rose are you talking about Shimu-chan?
Shimu: The rose you told Hidan to give me!
Tobi: I didn’t told him anything. I saw him with a rose that
day and he hide it fast when he saw me but I never told him to get you a rose.
Shimu’s eyes were wide open, she then looked down blushing
with a smile on her face.
Hidan: Oi!
Shimu looked up to see Hidan standing on the water with
Kakuzu and Itachi. Shimu had a silly smile cause of the thought of the rose,
Hidan looked at her weird but then ignore it.
Hidan: We are going to train here.
Shimu: Is okay.
Hidan: I didn’t ask you.
Shimu: Sorry…
Hidan: Hm…
Itachi sat down beside Shimu, Shimu poked his arm Itachi looked
at her and chuckled. Hidan and Kakuzu began to train. Hidan took his shirt off
and throw it to Shimu’s face, Shimu lower his shirt under her eyes she didn’t
wanted anyone to see her blush, but then Itachi snatch the shirt off of her and
throw it some where else, there Hidan saw Shimu blushing he chuckled and
grabbed his sword.
Hidan: Let’s do this shit!
And then they began to train, at one moment Hidan throw his
sword to Tobi, Tobi hide and Itachi had to grabbed the sword.
Itachi: Stop throwing shit!
Hidan chuckled and began to use Tai justu, which it is
Shimu’s favorite justsu. So… HOT!. Shimu
thought. She stat there staring at Hidan’s move, how fast he was and how strong
he was. She sat there staring at his silver hair that reach to the back of his
neck, she then began to stare at his muscle how big they were, how strong they
were, Shimu was blushing so much she didn’t realize it, but Itachi did.
Itachi: Are you okay?
Shimu snapped out of it looked at Itachi and with the
biggest smile and said.
Shimu: I couldn’t be better!
Weirdo… Itachi
thought.
To be continued…
Hi there,
ReplyDeleteYou sent me a message on my Tumblr to present me your fanfiction. :) How are you? I've been reading the story chapters, and, sorry for saying that to you, I really don't dig Akatsuki stories with OCs. I think OCs tend to fall into the cliché type (dead parents, tragic past, rape...) and I can't think of Akatsuki with another woman than Konan. Pardon me for saying that, but I've read so many "oc-gets-hired-by-akatsuki-and-falls-in-love-with-one-of-them-or-all-of-them", I get kind of sad. I love fanfiction (yaoi, lemon, comedy, angst, drama...), but only with canon characters. Thank you for sending me the link, though. :) I think you write well and that you could explore a little bit more the characters.
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